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The figure illustrates the information about different kinds of energy usage in the USA over a period of 50 years from 1980 to 2030.

The figure illustrates the information about different kinds of energy usage in the USA over a period of 50 years from 1980 to 2030. q2Pa
The figure illustrates the information about different kinds of energy usage in the USA over a period of 50 years from 1980 to 2030. Overall, at the start of the period, the consumption of petrol and oil is high, followed by coal and natural gas with a consumption rate of about half of the oil and petrol while the usage of nuclear energy and solar energy is significantly low as compared to the oil and petrol. with regard to the amount of petrol and oil usage, at the start of the period 35 litres in 1980 and after that line fluctuated and rose at the end of the period.
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kinds of energy usage in the USA over a
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of 50 years from 1980 to 2030.
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start
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, the consumption of
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petrol
and
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oil
is high, followed by coal and natural gas with a consumption rate of about half of the
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oil
and
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petrol
while the usage of nuclear energy and solar energy is
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low as compared to the
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oil
and
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petrol
.
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with
regard to the amount of
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petrol
and
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oil
usage, at the
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start
of the
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period
35
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in 1980 and after that line fluctuated and rose at the
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IELTS academic The figure illustrates the information about different kinds of energy usage in the USA over a period of 50 years from 1980 to 2030.

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  American English
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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