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The line graph illustrates the millions pound which spent on books on internet in the UK and the pie chart reveal percentage of books which purchased by England.

The line graph illustrates the millions pound which spent on books on internet in the UK and the pie chart reveal percentage of books which purchased by England. gMLO
The line graph illustrates the millions pound which spent on books on internet in the UK and the pie chart reveal percentage of books which purchased by England. Overall, spending money on books was increased. Maximum books bought by United kingdom. As is observed from the line graph, in 1997, just over the £10 millions spent on books, which rose by approximately 6 millions pound in 1998. Books followed an upward trend in 1999 and reached at around £ 23 millions in 2000. It were almost same in following year. In 2002, below 25 millions pound allocated on books. In terms of the pie chart, the sale of books can be noticed 81% In England. 10% and 8% books purchased by Wales and Scotland respectively. Soly 1% books were buying by Northern Ireland.
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in 2000. It were almost same in following year. In 2002, below 25
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pound allocated on
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. In terms of the pie chart, the sale of
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81% In England. 10% and 8%
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the millions pound which spent on books on internet in the UK and the pie chart reveal percentage of books which purchased by England.

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