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The given pie chart illustrates the results of analysis of adolescent activities.

The given pie chart illustrates the results of analysis of adolescent activities. bny6

The given pie chart illustrates the results of analysis of adolescent activities. Two charts illustrate cultural and leisure activities for boys on the right chart and left chart for the girls. Generally speaking, computer gaming as well as playing basketball are the most popular leisure for boys, on the other hand dancing along with reading is for girls. Interestingly children percentage of activities are same for listening to music. It is apparently seen that computer gaming and playing basketball taking 60% of total activities for boys. The least popular activity is reading having a tiny portion of 2%. . On the other hand trendy leisure activity is a dancing for girls 27% also reading time is much higher comparing to boys 21%. PC gaming is 16% almost 2 times fewer than boys, however just over one- third compacts netball, listening to music and gymnastics.

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