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The pie charts show the percentage of car ownership by make in three different countries in 2015

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The three pie charts illustrate the information about the proportion of Car ownership in USA, Canada and UK in 2015. In USA, Volkswagen was the most dominating manufacturer along with Ford, General motors and Renault-Nissan contributing more than half of overall percentage in 2015. The lowest ownership of cars were Honda, Jaguar and FCA with 2. 2%, 3% and 3. 5% respectively. One fifth percentage was accounted by BMW, PSA and Hyundai. In 2015, General motors and Ford were the most acquired Car by Canadas citizens accounted nearly 40% of ownership. Other significant proportions were 14. 8, 12. 5, 9. 5, 8. 2 and 7. 7 of companies like Toyota, FCA, Honda, Nission and Hyundai orderly. And other companies made up accounted just more than one in ten. Brands like BMW- Mini, Daimier and Subaru were the lowest contributor at 2. 1, 2. 2 and 2. 3 percentage simultaneously in UK in 2015. With nearly same % Volkswagen and FCA were the most demanded companies contributing nearly 33% of rest of ownership. 50% were accounted for total sum of 4 brands i. e. , General Motors, Hyundai-Kia, Toyota and Honda with slight change on their proportion. General Motors were one the favourite car companies among other brands in this three various countries in 2015.
The three pie charts illustrate the information about the proportion of
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in USA
, Canada and UK in 2015.
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In USA
, Volkswagen was the most dominating manufacturer along with Ford, General
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motors
and Renault-Nissan contributing more than half of
overall
percentage in 2015. The lowest
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ownership
of
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cars
were Honda, Jaguar and FCA with 2. 2%, 3% and 3. 5%
respectively
. One fifth percentage was
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accounted
by BMW, PSA and Hyundai. In 2015, General
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motors
and Ford were the most acquired
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Car
by
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Canadas
citizens
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accounted
nearly
40% of
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ownership
. Other significant proportions were 14. 8, 12. 5, 9. 5, 8. 2 and 7. 7 of
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companies
like Toyota, FCA, Honda,
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Nission
and Hyundai orderly. And other
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companies
made up
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accounted
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more than one in ten. Brands like BMW- Mini,
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Daimier
and Subaru were the lowest contributor at 2. 1, 2. 2 and 2. 3 percentage
simultaneously
in UK in 2015. With
nearly
same % Volkswagen and FCA were the most demanded
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companies
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nearly
33% of rest of
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ownership
. 50% were
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accounted
for total sum of 4 brands
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,
General
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Motors
, Hyundai-Kia, Toyota and Honda with slight
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on their proportion. General
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Motors
were
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favourite
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car
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companies
among other brands in this three various countries in 2015.
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IELTS academic The pie charts show the percentage of car ownership by make in three different countries in 2015

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