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The figure illustrates the changes than have happened in the seaside resort called Templeton from 1990 to 2005.

The figure illustrates the changes than have happened in the seaside resort called Templeton from 1990 to 2005. 0Ax51
The figure illustrates the changes than have happened in the seaside resort called Templeton from 1990 to 2005. Overall, it can be seen that the resort became more industrialized and green landscape was replaced by new facilities. Looking at the maps more detailed, we can see that five-story buildings were built to accommodate lots of tourists. The other structures that have been added are an airport in the north part of the town, a factory next to the railway station. Simple houses were removed, and the supermarket was built between a new road and an existing road. Before this changes occurred, there were only school and hospital with lots of trees. As well as the buildings that have been mentioned above, the new facilities include railway, which was prolonged along the sea in the southern part of the town. Along with this, there was added a ferry in south east part of the resort.
The figure illustrates the
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changes
than have happened in the seaside resort called Templeton from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the resort became more industrialized and green landscape
was replaced
by new facilities.

Looking at the maps more detailed, we can
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see
that five-story buildings
were built
to accommodate lots of tourists. The other structures that have been
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added
are an airport in the north part of the town, a factory
next
to the railway station. Simple
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houses
were removed
, and the supermarket
was built
between a new road and an existing road.
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Before
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this
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changes
occurred, there were
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only
school and hospital with lots of trees.

As well
as the buildings that have
been mentioned
above, the new facilities include railway, which
was prolonged
along the sea in the southern part of the town. Along with this, there was
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added
a ferry in
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south east
part of the resort.

IELTS academic The figure illustrates the changes than have happened in the seaside resort called Templeton from 1990 to 2005.

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154 words
6.0
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