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maps given below shows city hospital changes.

maps given below shows city hospital changes. A3a21
The two maps given below represents pathway to the city hospital in year 2007 and in 2010. As it can be seen clearly, two roundabouts and a bus station is constructed at the starting and at the end of the hospital road, similarly a bus atation and a public car park were constructed near to the hospital. In the old city hospital map, there was no separate public car park, in the city hospital 2010 map, separate public car par is constructed in the east direction. Likewise, old bus stop which was on both side of the city hospital road is constructed into bus station which is in the west direction. The new bus station is inter-connected with two roundabout’s which are linked to both city hospital and city road. staff car park and public car park are now separate and both having link to ring road.
The two maps
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in year 2007 and in 2010.

As it can be
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, two roundabouts and a bus station is
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were
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near to the hospital.

In the
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city
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map, there was no separate
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, in the city
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hospital
2010 map, separate
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par is
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in the east direction.

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which was on both side of the city
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is
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into bus station which is in the west direction. The new bus station is inter-connected with two
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roundabout’s
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city
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staff
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separate and both having link to ring
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