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Amount of Co2 emitted from 2000 to 2030

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The line graph and bar chart illustrate the information and predictions regarding number of vehicle in million and amount of Co2 released by them into different country over a period of 30 years overall it can be seen from line graph and bar graph that vehicle number will increase dramatically and the maximum amount of Co2 has been emitted by cars. The number of the number of vehicle increased significantly from 20 million to 35 million in a gap of 10 years then from 2010 to 2030, it is estimated to accelerate sharply 62 million. In regard to amount of Co2 emitted in 2000 2. 3 tonnes of Co2 was emitted by car which was the highest figure in that year and it grew to 2. 7 tons after 10 year it is likely to follow the same trend to reach 3 tons of Co2. However the lowest CO2 releasing vehicle was based by 0. 7 tonnes from 2010 to 2030. In 2000 when release 0. 3 tons of Co2 it is interesting to note that there will be no change in amount of Co2 emitted by Van from 2010 to 2013 0. 6 million tons trucks admitted 0. 5 tons of Co2 in 2000 with increased by 0. 4 tons a growth will be seen in CO2 emission released by trucks till 2030 from 0. 8 to 1. 3 tons
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