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The event table provide the data of underground railway system for six different towns.

The event table provide the data of underground railway system for six different towns. aE38V
The event table provide the data of underground railway system for six different towns. As observing data of London City there was established underground railway in the year of 1863 for the root of 394 kilometres 775 million passengers travelled for annual. In 20th century there were food different cities started underground railway system. Paris and Tokyo started system in 1900 and 1927 respectively, where one 99 kilometre route of Paris end 155 kilometre route of Tokyo runned: surprisingly, that to highest users of the system are belonging from these two cities which is 119 1000, 000 in Paris and 1927 million passengers of Tokyo per annual. Analysing the data of Washington DC in 1976 train run below the surface of the earth system open for root of 136 kilometre which is used by one 140 4000, 000 people every year. In 1981 go to city started this facility whereas Los Angeles open in 2001 with route of 28 kilometres. overall, the least route and lowest user of underground railway system come from Kyoto which was 11 kilometre route and 45, 000, 000 users every year.
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was established
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in the year of 1863 for the root of 394
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775 million passengers travelled for annual. In 20th century there were food
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cities
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started
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. Paris and Tokyo
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started
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in 1900 and 1927
respectively
, where one 99
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kilometre
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route
of Paris
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end
155
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kilometre
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route
of Tokyo
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are belonging
from these two
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which is 119 1000, 000 in Paris and 1927 million passengers of Tokyo per annual.

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open for root of 136
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kilometre
which is
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used
by one 140 4000, 000
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people
every year. In 1981 go to city
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started
this facility whereas Los Angeles open in 2001 with
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route
of 28
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kilometres
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and lowest user of
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kilometre
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and 45, 000, 000 users every year.

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