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the drinker for either tea or coffee in five cities in australia

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the chart showing five cities in australia according to people drinking and buying coffee and tea. according to what is shown, the people who went to cafe for either coffee or tea is relatively more in all cities except adelaide. but it is clearly that the people how bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks have the lowest ratio in all five cities. the only case that instant coffee bought have the highest percentage is in Adelaide it is almost 50% but in usual it's between the fresh coffee ratio and for the wenter for the cafes goers. to sum up some points, the most drinker fresh coffee is in Sydney and the highest people how bought instant coffee was in Hobart and for goers into cafe it was for Melbourne. in conclusion this five cities have a good population for pepole who went for cafe for tea and coffee.
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chart showing five cities in
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australia
according to
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people
drinking and buying
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coffee
and tea.

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according
to what
is shown
, the
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people
who went to
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cafe
for either
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coffee
or tea is
relatively
more in all cities except
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adelaide
.

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but
it is
clearly
that the
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people
how
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bought
fresh
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coffee
in last 4 weeks have the lowest ratio in all five cities.

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the
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only
case that instant
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coffee
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bought
have the highest percentage is in Adelaide it is almost 50%
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but
in usual it's between the fresh
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coffee
ratio and for the
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wenter
for the
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cafes
goers.

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to
sum up
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some
points, the most drinker fresh
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coffee
is in Sydney and the highest
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people
how
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bought
instant
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coffee
was in Hobart and for goers into
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cafe
it was for Melbourne.

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in
conclusion this five cities have a
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good
population for
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pepole
who went for
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cafe
for tea and
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.

IELTS academic the drinker for either tea or coffee in five cities in australia

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
150 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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