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The two maps below shows the construction of tourism facilities before and after. Selecting and reporting the main features of this.

The two maps below shows the construction of tourism facilities before and after. Selecting and reporting the main features of this. m36N8

Both maps display an island, before and after it was developed for tourism. The island is approximately 250 metres long, has palm trees dotted around it, is surrounded by ocean and has a beach to the west. Over the period, the island was completely transformed with the addition of a hotel and a pier; however, the eastern part of the island appears to have been left undeveloped. The most noticeable additions are the hotel rooms. 6 buildings, surrounding some trees, have been built in the west of the island and 9 buildings have been constructed in the centre of the island. Between the two accommodation areas, a reception building and a restaurant have been developed. A pier has also been built on the south coast of the island, allowing yachts access to the resort. Apart from the trees, the beach remains the only natural feature to remain relatively untouched; however, it does appear that it is now used for swimming

Both maps display an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and after it was developed
 for tourism.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 is approximately 250 Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.meters
metres
 long, has palm trees dotted around it, is surrounded
 by ocean and has a beach to the west. Over the period, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 was completely transformed with the addition of a hotel and a pier; however
, the eastern part of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 appears to have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 undeveloped.

The most noticeable additions are the hotel rooms. 6 buildings, surrounding This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 trees, have been built
 in the west of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 and 9 buildings have been constructed
 in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. Between the two accommodation areas, a reception building and a restaurant have been developed
.

A pier has also
been built
 on the south coast of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
, allowing yachts access to the resort. Apart from the trees, the beach remains the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 natural feature to remain relatively
 untouched; however
, it does appear that it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphswimming.swimming!swimming?swimming:swimming,swimming;
swimming