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The two side-by-side diagrams illustrate the area of an airport after and before the prospective modifications and expansions.

The two side-by-side diagrams illustrate the area of an airport after and before the prospective modifications and expansions. kWRG2
The two side-by-side diagrams illustrate the area of an airport after and before the prospective modifications and expansions. Overall, it is apparent that by the next year site of the airport will have changed dramtically. The most obvious change is the number of gates on the northermost part of the airport. To begin with the present building structure, the Southwest airport is currently divided into three segments: departures, arrivals, and the north side. There are security, passport control, a cafe and a check-in counter in the left part of the airport. The right part consists of passport control and customs. Eight gates are connected with a walkway on the north side of the airport. With the future plan, ten more gates will be built in a “Y” shape, and all gates will be connected with a sky train rather than a walkway. The cafe will be moved to the left bottom, and the check-in counter will be replaced by a bag drop room and relocated to the last safe place. A new cafe and an ATM are predicted to build east of the airport on the right side. Some space on the right side of the airport will be extended that will be used for car hire. There will be two departures and two arrivals gates doors in the airport. Security, passport control, and customs will be unchanged. However, the future floor plan shows shops immediately upon exiting the security section for departures.
The two side-by-side diagrams illustrate the area of an
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airport
after and
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before
the prospective modifications and expansions.

Overall
, it is apparent that by the
next
year site of the
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airport
will have
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changed
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dramtically
. The most obvious
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change
is the number of
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gates
on the
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northermost
part of the airport.

To
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begin
with the present building structure, the Southwest
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airport
is
currently
divided into three segments: departures, arrivals, and the north side. There are security, passport control, a
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cafe
and a
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check
-in counter in the
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left
part of the
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airport
. The right part consists of passport control and customs. Eight
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gates
are connected
with a walkway on the north side of the airport.

With the future plan, ten more
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gates
will
be built
in a “Y” shape, and all
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gates
will
be connected
with a sky train
rather
than a walkway. The
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cafe
will be
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moved
to the
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left
bottom, and the
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check
-in counter will
be replaced
by a bag drop room and relocated to the last safe place. A new
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cafe
and an ATM
are predicted
to build east of the
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airport
on the right side.
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Some
space on the right side of the
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airport
will
be extended
that will be
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used
for car hire. There will be two departures and two arrivals
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gates
doors in the
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airport
. Security, passport control, and customs will
be unchanged
.
However
, the future floor plan
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shows
shops immediately upon exiting the security section for departures.
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IELTS academic The two side-by-side diagrams illustrate the area of an airport after and before the prospective modifications and expansions.

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