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the process that student apply their application form to enter university

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The diagram describes how the young at high school apply their application form to study at university. Overall, the process of this procedure has four main steps, and begins with a student applying for an application form and finishes at the stage that student enrolling into university. Firstly, a student who graduates high school needs to complete the application form, and repair all their documents that are required. Secondly, they send all their full files to the administration part of the university. At this stage, students must implement their files which are not eligible for university’s regulations and have to re-send these to the admin. In case that student's form is rejected, students have two situations in which they have to complete the form for an alternative course or be completely canceled by the admin. If the application form of the student is full and strict, then the admin is going to send the acceptance complete letter in two weeks. Finally, before entering university, student have done two works such as select subjects and register with Dean.
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how the young at high school apply their
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application
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form
to study at university.

Overall
, the process of this procedure has four main steps, and
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begins
with a
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student
applying for an
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application
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form
and finishes at the stage that
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student
enrolling into university.

Firstly
, a
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student
who
The verb 'to graduate' requires the preposition 'from': "graduates from".
graduates
high school needs to complete the
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application
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form
, and repair all their documents that
are required
.
Secondly
, they
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send
all their full files to the administration part of the university. At this stage,
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students
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must
implement their files which are not eligible for university’s regulations and
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have to
re-
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send
these to the admin. In case that student's
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form
is rejected
,
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students
have two situations in which they
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have to
complete the
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form
for an alternative course or be completely canceled by the admin. If the
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application
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form
of the
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student
is full and strict, then the admin is going to
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send
the acceptance complete letter in two weeks.
Finally
,
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before
entering university,
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student
have done two works such as select subjects and register with Dean.
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IELTS academic the process that student apply their application form to enter university

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3 paragraphs
177 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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