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The digram shows the steps of hiring processat ACME carporation.

The digram shows the steps of hiring processat ACME carporation. Gr9Lg
The provided flow chart demonstrates the information regarding that how ACME carporation recruit the applicants. Overall, it is clear that the hiring process of employees undergoes almost eight steps from submiting application to permanent position offered. It can be seen that at first stage, applicants submit application. After that, they attend initial qualifiying interview. Meanwhile, if means they do not meet basic qualifications and they are not employed. However, when applicants pass intetview then they have basic qualifications. Probing furter, at 4th stage, the organizations take aptitute test of employees. Alternatively, if applicants pass the aptitute test then the company check the perfomance of applicants for six months. whereas, if they fail the this test then it means they are not employed. At the next stage, the employees are evaluated for six months by the organization. Meanwhile, if applicants are not recommended then it means they are not employed. while if they are recommended then the company offer parmanent position to the applicants.
The provided flow chart demonstrates the information regarding that how ACME
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carporation
recruit the
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applicants
.
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, it is
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that the hiring process of employees undergoes almost eight steps from
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submiting
application to permanent position offered. It can be
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seen
that at
first
stage,
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applicants
submit application. After that, they attend initial
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qualifiying
interview. Meanwhile, if means they do not
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meet
basic
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qualifications and
they are not employed.
However
, when
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applicants
pass
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intetview
then they have basic qualifications. Probing
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furter
, at 4th stage, the organizations take
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aptitute
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test
of employees.
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, if
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applicants
pass the
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aptitute
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test
then the
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company
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check
the
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perfomance
of
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applicants
for six months.
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the this
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test
then it means they are not employed. At the
next
stage, the employees
are evaluated
for six months by the organization. Meanwhile, if
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applicants
are not recommended then it means they are not employed.
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while
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are recommended
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offer
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parmanent
position to the
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