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The chart below shows the value of one company’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one company’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. XRXr
The provided graph and table demonstrate the quantity of the exports by a company in various categories and the variation in the values in a period of two years, 2015 and 2016. Overall, the petroleum products earned the greatest amount while the textiles contributed the least to the export earnings in both the years. To start with, the year 2016 witnessed an elevation in most of the industries. The petroleum products contributed to around 60 billion dollars in 2015, 3 per cent increase, which jumped to around 63 billion dollars in the following year. Also, engineered goods noticed a spike of around 8. 5% with the 2016 graph standing at around 61 billion dollars. The highest spike was noticed in the textile industry, with an increase of around 15. 24% On the contrary, the earnings through the agricultural products declined to about 0. 81 per cent in the year 2016. The lowest elevation was seen in the agricultural products of just around 0. 81 per cent, and stood at around 31 billion dollars.
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in various categories and the variation in the values in a period of two years, 2015 and 2016.

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, the petroleum
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products
earned the greatest amount while the textiles contributed the least to the export earnings in both the years.

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with, the
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2016 witnessed an elevation in most of the industries. The petroleum
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contributed to
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around
60
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billion
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in 2015, 3 per cent increase, which jumped to
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63
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billion
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in the following
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.
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, engineered
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goods
noticed a spike of
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8. 5% with the 2016 graph standing at
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around
61
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billion
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dollars
. The highest spike
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in the textile industry, with an increase of
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around
15. 24%

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, the earnings through the agricultural
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products
declined to about 0. 81 per cent in the
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year
2016. The lowest elevation was
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seen
in the agricultural
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products
of
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around
0. 81 per cent, and stood at
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31
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billion
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one company’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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