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The differences between two maps

The differences between two maps Agxlw

These two maps illustrate some changes which have done in Dubai from the past to till now, and also show how this city has modernized recently. Particularly, we can see significant constructions in west part of this city, there were only one building and one house, but now so many properties and skyscrapers have been built there, and changed that place to a modern residential area. Furthermore some buildings have modernized and some other buildings and shopping malls have been constructed newly in east of the city. Although the clock tower which is located in middle of crossroads, has still remained the same. Only some new trees have been planted around this tower. In addition the roads have been extended, so this is why the roadside trees have cut down and removed. To conclude, these maps indicates substantial differences that have taken place in Dubai from many years ago till today.

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Although the clock tower which is located
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