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The two diagrams below show the layouts of two offices, one to accommodate a maximum of eight people and the other to fit a maximum of ten people. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two diagrams below show the layouts of two offices, one to accommodate a maximum of eight people and the other to fit a maximum of ten people. Xlr8r
The two maps above illustrate the location of two rooms' furniture based on their layout. While the left one is designed for eight people or less, the other is suitable for a maximum of ten individuals. Generally, there are several differences between their features To begin, both rooms have the same working space. Their entrances are located at the top right corner. Moreover, the type of furniture in the two rooms have something in common, only the position is different. Room A accommodates up to eight people. It has a table which is lined up along the length of the room in the centre. It is between eight chairs that are divided equally into 4 pieces on both sides with desks above. So, the room is fit with eight people. At the upper left corner is the bookshelves, which is opposite the door. Lastly, there is a coffee machine at the bottom area. Room B is furnished similar to the other one. Because it permits more people, chairs here are arranged in two rows of 5 and are facing each other. Desks are put together into a big one. Beside ten chairs is a table that has the same size as the one in room A. The coffee machine here is put at the top area near the entrance. Furthermore, room B also features a bookshelves. Unlike the other one, it is located at the bottom right corner and next to the main door.
The two maps above illustrate the location of two rooms' furniture based on their layout. While the
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left
one
is designed
for eight
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people
or
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less
, the
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other
is suitable for a maximum of ten individuals.
Generally
, there are several differences between their features

To
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begin
, both
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rooms
have the same working space. Their entrances
are located
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at the top right corner
.
Moreover
, the type of furniture in the two
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rooms
have something in common,
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only
the position is
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different
.
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Room
A accommodates up to eight
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people
. It has a table which
is lined
up along the length of the
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room
in the
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centre
. It is between eight chairs that
are divided
equally
into 4 pieces on both sides with desks above.
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So
, the
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room
is fit
with eight
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people
. At the upper
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left
corner is the bookshelves, which is opposite the door.
Lastly
, there is a coffee machine at the bottom area.

Room B
is furnished
similar to the
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other
one.
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Because
it permits more
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people
, chairs here
are arranged
in two rows of 5 and are facing each
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other
. Desks
are put
together into a
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big
one. Beside ten chairs is a table that has the same size as the one in
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room
A. The coffee machine here
is put
at the top area near the entrance.
Furthermore
,
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room
B
also
features
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a bookshelves
. Unlike the
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other
one, it
is located
The usual prepositions to use with a corner "in" not "on". Did you mean "in the bottom right corner"?
at the bottom right corner
and
next
to the main door.
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IELTS academic The two diagrams below show the layouts of two offices, one to accommodate a maximum of eight people and the other to fit a maximum of ten people.

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