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Southwest Airport is intended to reconstruct in the following years.

Southwest Airport is intended to reconstruct in the following years. GJK8g

The given blueprint, containing the two graphs of the current and the future, depicts how the Southwest Airport is intended to reconstruct in the following years. Let’s look at the map. The distinct conversion at first sight is that the boarding platform would be extended into a Y shape after developing an extra 10 boarding gates. With the exception of the expanding, significantly, the facility of passenger walking lane is also planned to be replaced by the tram. Moreover, the shops could be sited at the entrance of this area out of visitor’s convenience. Regarding the departures of the airport, the coffee shop and a new service called Bag Drop will be found on the left hand, and the Check-in counters will be moved to the right hand, which these positions are reverse at this moment. On the other hand, the arrivals sector would possess the three latest facilities, which are ATM, Car Hire and a brand new cafe. They are clear to be found on the right side, but the hiring cars segment is needed to slightly enlarge the room. All in all, it is apparently to notice that the redeveloping plan has been considered rather throughout in order to reach its aim.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 blueprint, containing the two graphs of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 and the future, depicts how the Southwest Airport is intended
 to reconstruct in the following years.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
’s look at the map. The distinct conversion at first
 sight is that the boarding platform would be extended
 into a Y shape after developing an extra 10 boarding gates. Consider using "except" or "except for"ExceptExcept for
With the exception of
 the expanding, significantly
, the facility of passenger walking lane is also
 planned to be replaced
 by the tram. Moreover
, the shops could be sited
 at the entrance of this area out of visitor’s convenience.

Regarding the departures of the airport, the coffee shop and a new service called Bag Drop will be found
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 hand, and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
Check
-in counters will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the right hand, which these positions are reverse at this moment.

On the other hand
, the arrivals sector would possess the three latest facilities, which are ATM, Car Hire and a 'brand new' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "brand-new".brand-new
brand new
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
. They are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 to be found
 on the right side, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the hiring cars segment is needed
 to slightly
 enlarge the room.

All in all, it is apparently
 to notice that the redeveloping plan has been considered
rather
 throughout in order to reach its aim. 