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The diagrom below shows the changes in cinema from 1980 until now.

The given diagram compares the changes in cinema structure from 1980 till present. Overall, It can be seen that, the number of cinema hall significantly increased over time. Also, recreational room and DVD shop were installed whereas car parking was completely removed as a part of redevelopment. With regards to cinema hall, three new theaters were added thus making the count to increase from two in 1980 to five in present day. Moreover, car parking which took majority of space in 1980, was demolished later and readjustment of theaters were made in the available space. In addition to cinema halls, recreational room and DVD shop were also introduced for people visiting theaters in current day as opposed to no relaxation room and DVD shop back in 1980. Additionally, Foods were also included along with drinks.

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