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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The maps illustrate the developments which took place in the public garden namely Grange Park from 1920 to the present day. Overall, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a traditional to a modern one. In the south, the most noticeable change is that stage has converted into theatre for concerts. Moreover, the rose gardens disappeared except one, which is facing theater, and one rose garden is appeared in the place of fountain which was in the middle of the park in 1920. Also, seats are removed from over the park, and placed along with the rose garden. In the north, another noticeable point is that pond is transformed into children’s play area, and glass house has demolished and replaced with a water feature. In addition, café is opened on the left side of play area at the place of rose garden. Further development is the car park which establishes underground at the east side of the park. However, the entrance at north and south has been remained the same.

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garden
namely
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Park
 from 1920 to the present day.

Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a traditional to a modern one.

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change
 is that stage has converted into Possible spelling mistake. ‘theatre’ is British English.theater
theatre
 for concerts. Moreover
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
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gardens
 disappeared except one, which is facing theater, and one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
is appeared
 in the place of fountain which was in the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 in 1920. Also
, seats are removed
 from over the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, and placed along with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
 garden.

In the north, another noticeable point is that pond is transformed
 into children’s play area, and glass This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 has demolished and replaced with a water feature. In addition
, café is opened
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of play area at the place of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
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garden
. Further
 development is the car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 which establishes underground at the east side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. However
, the entrance at north and south has been remained
 the same. 