Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Question_1: The table below gives information on consumer spending on different item in five different countries in 2002.

The table representing the facts about the amount spending the national expenditure on the consumer good items in European countries are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden in the year 2002. First, the highest spending money on food, drinks, and tobacco by the turkish people, which was the three times bigger than other goods. Hence, the Irish people spends more than 28% on the same category and other three countries people was spent just over the 15% for the food, drinks, and tobaccos products. For the clothing and footwear most of the countries spending around 5% to 9% on behalf of its part spent by the Italian people up to 9%. Secondly, the outlay of the leisure activities and education are much less than the other two part of the goods. Here, the highest amount was spent for education and entertainment was done by turkish peoples all over 4. 35 %. At the last, the lowest percentages part occupies by the leisure and education by the Spanish people. None of the nation spent more than 5% on the education and leisure activities as per the given data of the table.
The table representing the facts about the amount spending the national expenditure on the consumer
good
items in European countries are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden in the year 2002.

First
, the highest spending money on food, drinks, and tobacco by the
turkish
people
, which was the three times bigger than other
goods
.
Hence
, the Irish
people
spends
more than 28% on the same category and other three countries
people
was
spent
just
over the 15% for the food, drinks, and tobaccos products. For the clothing and footwear most of the countries spending around 5% to 9% on behalf of its part
spent
by the Italian
people
up to 9%.

Secondly
, the outlay of the leisure activities and
education
are much less than the other two part of the
goods
. Here, the highest amount was
spent
for
education
and entertainment
was done
by
turkish
peoples
all over 4. 35 %. At the last, the lowest percentages part occupies by the leisure and
education
by the Spanish
people
. None of the nation
spent
more than 5% on the
education
and leisure activities as per the
given
data of the table.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic Question_1: The table below gives information on consumer spending on different item in five different countries in 2002.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts