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Question_1: The table below gives information on consumer spending on different item in five different countries in 2002.

The table representing the facts about the amount spending the national expenditure on the consumer good items in European countries are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden in the year 2002. First, the highest spending money on food, drinks, and tobacco by the turkish people, which was the three times bigger than other goods. Hence, the Irish people spends more than 28% on the same category and other three countries people was spent just over the 15% for the food, drinks, and tobaccos products. For the clothing and footwear most of the countries spending around 5% to 9% on behalf of its part spent by the Italian people up to 9%. Secondly, the outlay of the leisure activities and education are much less than the other two part of the goods. Here, the highest amount was spent for education and entertainment was done by turkish peoples all over 4. 35 %. At the last, the lowest percentages part occupies by the leisure and education by the Spanish people. None of the nation spent more than 5% on the education and leisure activities as per the given data of the table.

The table representing the facts about the amount spending the national expenditure on the consumer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 items in European countries are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden in the year 2002.

First
, the highest spending money on food, drinks, and tobacco by the Possible spelling mistake found.TurkishTurksKurdishTurkicfurnishtarnish
turkish
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
, which was the three times bigger than other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
. Hence
, the Irish You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
If ‘people’ is plural here, don’t use the third-person singular verb.spend
spends
 more than 28% on the same category and other three countries You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over the 15% for the food, drinks, and tobaccos products. For the clothing and footwear most of the countries spending around 5% to 9% on behalf of its part You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 by the Italian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 up to 9%.

Secondly
, the outlay of the leisure activities and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 are much less than the other two part of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
. Here, the highest amount was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 and entertainment was done
 by Possible spelling mistake found.TurkishTurksKurdishTurkicfurnishtarnish
turkish
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
peoples
 all over 4. 35 %. At the last, the lowest percentages part occupies by the leisure and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 by the Spanish You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. None of the nation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 more than 5% on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 and leisure activities as per the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 data of the table. 