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The diagram below represents the “Comparison of how urban Chinese spent across major categories in 1995 versus the spending habits in 2011”. Summaries the information given in the diagrams. Write at least 150 words.

The below given pie chart illustrates the information in the diagram about the differentiation of china spending habit during 1995 and 2011. Firstly, Urban Chinese spend 50% of the money on food in 1995 which was decreased to 36% in 2011. Secondly, they spend in clothing and transportation which was 14% and 5% respectively in 1995 and 11% and 14% respectively in 2011. Spending habit in household facilities of urban Chinese remain constant i. e. 7% in both the years. Other sources of spending habit like residential, recreation(Education), medicine and residential has a very less increase from 1995 to 2011. In conclusion, Urban Chinese spend most of the money in food. Also, only household facility remains constant in all the categories.
The below
given
pie chart illustrates the information in the diagram about the differentiation of china spending habit during 1995 and 2011.

Firstly
, Urban Chinese spend 50% of the money on food in 1995 which
was decreased
to 36% in 2011.
Secondly
, they spend in clothing and transportation which was 14% and 5%
respectively
in 1995 and 11% and 14%
respectively
in 2011. Spending habit in household facilities of urban Chinese remain constant
i. e.
7% in both the years. Other sources of spending habit like residential, recreation(Education), medicine and residential has a
very
less increase from 1995 to 2011.

In conclusion
, Urban Chinese spend most of the money in food.
Also
,
only
household facility remains constant in all the categories.
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IELTS academic The diagram below represents the “Comparison of how urban Chinese spent across major categories in 1995 versus the spending habits in 2011”.

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