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The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in a European country in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts illustrate the percentage of people who use the devices aged 18-25 to watch television in the European country in 2007 and 2017. Overall, in both years, the most significant devices used by people were conventional TV and Flat-screen TV, which together accounted for over half, whereas the device increased dramatically for mobile phone and tablet, there were corresponding drops in using the device on things such as laptop and on other desktops computer. At 18% we can see that desktop computer accounted for the majority of people who used the device in 2007, but this percentage had dropped to 12% by 2017. Likewise, in 2007, using a mobile phone 15% which rose marginally to 26% after 10 years. In contrast, using the device of conventional TV and laptop saw the opposite trend. Conventional TV (34%) and laptop (20%) decreased dramatically to 4% and 12% respectively. Similar to the device of Flat-screen TV (8%) and tablet (5%) in 2007 saw a rising trend, growing from only 27% and 19% in 2017.
The two pie charts illustrate the percentage of
people
who
use
the
devices
aged 18-25 to
watch
television in the European country in 2007 and 2017.

Overall
, in both years, the most significant
devices
used
by
people
were conventional TV and Flat-screen TV, which together accounted for over half, whereas the
device
increased
dramatically
for mobile phone and tablet, there were corresponding drops in using the
device
on things such as laptop and on other
desktops
computer.

At 18% we can
see
that desktop computer accounted for the majority of
people
who
used
the
device
in 2007,
but
this percentage had dropped to 12% by 2017.
Likewise
, in 2007, using a mobile phone 15% which rose
marginally
to 26% after 10 years.
In contrast
, using the
device
of conventional TV and laptop
saw
the opposite trend. Conventional TV (34%) and laptop (20%) decreased
dramatically
to 4% and 12%
respectively
. Similar to the
device
of Flat-screen TV (8%) and tablet (5%) in 2007
saw
a rising trend, growing from
only
27% and 19% in 2017.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in a European country in two different years.

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