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The diagrams show the things which are involved in the process of cement production and how to produce concrere .

The diagrams show the things which are involved in the process of cement production and how to produce concrere. JPje
The given two diagrams illustrate the information about the various stages and things, which are used in the production of cement, and how concrete is produced by using cement, for building construction. It can be clearly seen that first diagram shows the process of cement production. In first step, limestone and clay are taken and these two things are passed through crusher, which produce the powder of limestone and clay. After that, the powder send into the mixer for mix it. Then, the mixtute is sent into the rotatung heater by mixer, where the rotating heater works with heat. After heating step, the mixture is passed through grinder and cement production us completed as well as cement is packed in bags. Moving towards to the concrete production, the process begins with the combination of 15% cement, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% gravel. Further, the combination of these four things is sent into concrete mixture, which rotate the combination for limited time for production of concrete. Overall, all steps are important and interlinked with each other if any step is missed then it may halt the whole production of cement and concrete.
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two diagrams illustrate the information about the various stages and things, which are
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in the
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production
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cement
, and how concrete
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by using
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cement
, for building construction. It can be
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first
diagram
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the process of
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cement
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production
. In
first
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step
, limestone and clay
are taken
and these two things
are passed
through crusher, which produce the powder of limestone and clay. After that, the powder
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send
into the mixer for mix it. Then, the
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mixtute
is
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sent
into the
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rotatung
heater by mixer, where the rotating heater works with heat. After heating
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step
, the mixture
is passed
through grinder and
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cement
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production
us completed
as well
as
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cement
is packed
in bags. Moving towards to the concrete
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production
, the process
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begins
with the combination of 15%
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cement
, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% gravel.
Further
, the combination of these four things is
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sent
into concrete mixture, which rotate the combination for limited time for
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production
of concrete.
Overall
, all
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steps
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important
and interlinked with each other if any
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step
is missed
then it may halt the whole
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production
of
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cement
and concrete.
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IELTS academic The diagrams show the things which are involved in the process of cement production and how to produce concrere.

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