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The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information.

The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information. 5x7A
The diagram illustrates the process for high school students to join in the university. Overall, To join in universities there are around 10 steps to get a seat in university. Firstly, after completion of high school education you have to fill the application form which it is available in website. After download the form we have to fill the details and send to Admin. Admin verify student background. If there is any mistakes or if student selected course was fully filled. He rejected and cancel application. In the rejection step you can complete Application for alternative course and send again to the admin. Secondly, If he/she can accept your application. Then admin can send to provisional acceptance for more documents required for these process take around 2 weeks of time after this step they compile documentation clearly and send to admin then the admin can give acceptance compete enrolment. Finally, the student get enrolment. they can select the subjects and take register with dean. after all this process students can allowed to the University.
The diagram illustrates the process for high school
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students
to
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join
in the university.

Overall
, To
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join
in universities there are around 10 steps to
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get
a seat in university.

Firstly
, after completion of high school education you
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have to
fill the
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application
form which it is available in website. After download the form we
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have to
fill the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
and
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send
to Admin. Admin verify
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student
background. If
Did you mean "there are any mistakes"?
there is any mistakes
or if
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student
selected course was
fully
filled. He rejected and cancel
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application
. In the rejection step you can complete
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Application
for alternative course and
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send
again to the admin.
Secondly
, If he/she can accept your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
application
. Then admin can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
send
to provisional acceptance for more documents required for these process take around 2 weeks of time after this step they compile documentation
clearly
and
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send
to admin then the admin can give acceptance compete
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enrolment
.

Finally
, the
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student
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get
Possible spelling mistake. 'enrolment' is British English.
enrolment
.
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they
can select the subjects and take register with dean.
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after
all this process
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students
can
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allowed
to the University.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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