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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. j0l1
The given diagram of working of hydroelectric power station illustrates how electricity is produced. To begin with, water from the river is stored in a high-level reservoir with the help of a dam. During the daytime, the stored water is supplied to the reversible turbine in the power station from intake to generate electricity. In the next step, reversible turbines are used to operate the generator. The generator then generates electricity, which is then transferred to power lines. From power lines, electricity is supplied to the national grid. The water which is passed through the reversible turbine is stored in a low-level reservoir. At night, water from the low-level reservoir is supplied back to high-level reservoir with the help reversible pump. The reversible at night used to pump water back into the high-level reservoir. The flow of water is towards the intake during this time. Intake is closed for water in high-level reservoir at night. Overall, the flow of water is from the high-level reservoir to low-level reservoir when the aim is to generate electricity.
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diagram of working of hydroelectric
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power
station illustrates how
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electricity
is produced
.

To
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begin
with,
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water
from the river
is stored
in a
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high-level
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reservoir
with the
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help
of a dam. During the daytime, the stored
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water
is supplied
to the
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reversible
turbine in the
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power
station from intake to generate
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electricity
. In the
next
step,
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reversible
turbines are
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used
to operate the generator. The generator then generates
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electricity
, which is then transferred to
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power
lines. From
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power
lines,
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electricity
is supplied
to the national grid. The
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water
which
is passed
through the
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reversible
turbine
is stored
in a low-level reservoir.

At night,
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water
from the low-level
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reservoir
is supplied
back to
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high-level
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reservoir
with the
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help
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reversible
pump. The
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reversible
at night
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used
to pump
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water
back into the
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high-level
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reservoir
. The flow of
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water
is towards the intake during this time. Intake
is closed
for
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water
in
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high-level
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reservoir
at night.

Overall
, the flow of
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water
is from the
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high-level
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reservoir
to low-level
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reservoir
when the aim is to generate
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electricity
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

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