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The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information.

The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information. KgNR

The given diagram illustrates how high school students can get entry in the university. Overall, it is clear that it is a multi-phase procedure and starts from completing high school education and ends in university admission, by submitting complete admission form and all required documents. First of all, the aspirants should have completed high school education. Then, they need to download application from the website to fill it. After completion of the admission form, it has to be sent to the admin. Also, documentation which has already been compiled is sent to them. Furthermore, admin office also recieve complete application forms for alternative courses. It is the admin office, which decides the fate of applications, by taking three decisions. Some of the applications are granted provincial acceptance in two weeks and they are asked to submit additional documents. The other applications face direct rejection, in which the rejected applicants have given the choice to either apply for alternative course or cancel their applications. The remaining applications are granted enrolment in two week time. Those who are enrolled in the University choose their subjects. After that, they register with the Dean and finally ready to start studying at University.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagram illustrates how high school students can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 entry in the university.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that it is a multi-phase procedure and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 from completing high school education and ends in university admission, by submitting complete admission form and all required documents.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the aspirants should have completed high school education. Then, they need to download You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
application
 from the website to fill it. After completion of the admission form, it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the admin. Also
, documentation which has already been compiled
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to them. Furthermore
, admin office also
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recieve
 complete You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
application
 forms for alternative courses. It is the admin office, which decides the fate of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
applications
, by taking three decisions. If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?Some
Some of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
applications
are granted
 provincial acceptance in two Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).weeks, and
weeks and
 they are asked
 to submit additional documents. The other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
applications
 face direct rejection, in which the rejected applicants have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 the choice to either apply for alternative course or cancel their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
applications
. The remaining You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
applications
are granted
Possible spelling mistake. 'enrolment' is British English.enrollment
enrolment
 in two week time.

Those who are enrolled
 in the University choose their subjects. After that, they register with the Dean and finally
 ready to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 studying at University. 