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the diagrams show the information about a place in 1980 and after the construction of a hydroelectric dam in 1990.

the diagrams show the information about a place in 1980 and after the construction of a hydroelectric dam in 1990. bxVb3

The information about a place in 1980 and after the erection of a hydroelectric dam in 1990 is depicted by the rendered diagrams. The following descriptions are going to compare the both diagrams. Looking at the layout for 1980, there was a river flowing from north to south among mountains. To the right side of the river, there was a large piece of land used for farming. Next to the irrigated land towards the east, a village was there. To the left side of river a forest was located to the north of some structures of architecture. Rare plants and animals were there near the structures towards the west. After the construction of hydroelectric dam in 1990, it can be seen that the river was expanded as a result of building of hydroelectric dam in the south of the stream flow and fishing could be done here. In the east, the irrigated land was replaced by hotel and village was shifted from east to south-east. Behind the dam, a number of electrical towers were added to the south. Overall, it is lucid that the area changed radically after the establishment of the dam.

The information about a place in 1980 and after the erection of a hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarrierdikeleveegateditchbank
dam
 in 1990 is depicted
 by the rendered diagrams. The following descriptions are going to compare the both diagrams.

Looking at the layout for 1980, there was a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
 flowing from north to south among mountains. To the right side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
, there was a large piece of land This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for farming. Next
 to the irrigated land towards the east, a village was there. To the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
 a forest was located
 to the north of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 structures of architecture. Rare plants and animals were there near the structures towards the west.

After the construction of hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarrierdikeleveegateditchbank
dam
 in 1990, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
was expanded
as a result
 of building of hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarrierdikeleveegateditchbank
dam
 in the south of the stream flow and fishing could be done
 here. In the east, the irrigated land was replaced
 by hotel and village was shifted
 from east to south-east. Behind the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarrierdikeleveegateditchbank
dam
, a number of electrical towers were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the south.

Overall
, it is lucid that the area This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
radically
 after the establishment of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarrierdikeleveegateditchbank
dam
. 