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The graph below shows the popularity of 3 bookstores in 3 different age groups Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph depicts, The various number of age group visitors per day at famous books stores like, Star mark, Annebook and Bookville. Overall, Star mark has the highest middle age group visitiors approximately 76%. Also, least at Annebook store only 22%. Moreover, bookvile store has around 45% visitors per day. Lowest seniors visit at Star mark and most of the seniors prefer to Bookvile store. The young generation choose to go Star mark in a sky touching numbers and very few adults depart to Annebbook store. On one hand, Most of the adults visiting at bookvile store and least shows interest at Annebook store 65% and 30% respectively. Hence, Starmark has the less adult as compared to bookvile approxmately 30%. On the other hand, The old generation 50 plus age people are more intersted in bookvile store lump sum 62 %. Furthermore, Some of seniors are look up at Annebook store 58% Therefore, least numbers of seniors goes at Star mark solely 22%.
The bar graph depicts, The various number of age group visitors per day at
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famous
books
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stores
like, Star
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mark
,
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Annebook
and
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Bookville
.

Overall
, Star
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mark
has the highest middle age group
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visitiors
approximately 76%.
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, least at
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Annebook
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store
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only
22%.
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,
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bookvile
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store
has around 45% visitors per day.
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Lowest
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seniors
visit at Star
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mark
and most of the
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seniors
prefer to
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Bookvile
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store
. The young generation choose to go Star
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mark
in a sky touching numbers and
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very
few adults depart to
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Annebbook
store.

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bookvile
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store
and least
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shows
interest at
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Annebook
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store
65% and 30%
respectively
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Starmark
has the less adult as compared to
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bookvile
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approxmately
30%.

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old
generation 50 plus age
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people
are more
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intersted
in
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bookvile
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store
lump sum 62 %.
Furthermore
,
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Some
of
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seniors
are look up at
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Annebook
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store
58%
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,
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numbers of
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goes at Star
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solely
22%.
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