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THE CHARTS BELOW ILLUSTRATES THE TYPES OF MOVIES PREFERRED AROUND THE GLOBE

THE CHARTS BELOW ILLUSTRATES THE TYPES OF MOVIES PREFERRED AROUND THE GLOBE PR0EE
1 THE PAIR OF PIE CHARTS DEPICTS THE GENRE OF MOVIES IN CONTINENT SUCH AS ASIA AND EUROPE. TO BEGIN WITH, ASIANS HAVE BEEN MORE KEENED ABOUT THE ACTION MOVIES WHICH CONTRIBUTES 50% OF THE PEOPLE WHEREAS EUROPEANS HAVE HALF OF THE RESIDENTS AS COMPARED TO ASIA WHICH IS 25%. THE CINEGOERS ARE MORE INTO SUPERHERO MOVIES IN EUROPE WHICH IS 40% AND HIGHEST AMONG ANOTHER GENRE OF MOVIES. IN ASIA ON 25% PREFERANCE OF PEOPLE TO WATCH SUPERHERO MOVIE. HERE IF WE FISH OUT THE INFO FROM FORMER AND LATER CHART DOCUMENTARY AND HORROR MOVIES ARE VERY LESS INCLINATION AMONG BOTH THE CONTINENTS THAT IS 15% AND 10% IN ASIA, 20% AND AND 15% IN EUROPE OVERALL. OTHER GENRES OF MOVIES PREFERANCE ARE SAME IN BOTH THE CHARTS BUT ALSO ASIANS ARE MORE KEEN TOWARDS ACTION MOVIES AND EUROPEANS ARE MORE ATTRACTED TO SUPERHEROES MOVIE BY WHICH WE CAN DEPICT THAT IN THESE TWO SECTIONS THEY PREFER DIFFERENT GENRES OF BEING WATCHING
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THE PAIR OF PIE CHARTS DEPICTS THE
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WITH, ASIANS HAVE BEEN MORE KEENED ABOUT THE ACTION
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WHICH CONTRIBUTES 50% OF THE
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WHEREAS EUROPEANS HAVE HALF OF THE RESIDENTS AS COMPARED TO ASIA WHICH IS 25%. THE
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ARE MORE INTO SUPERHERO
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IN EUROPE WHICH IS 40% AND HIGHEST AMONG ANOTHER
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OF
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. IN ASIA ON 25%
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. HERE IF WE FISH OUT THE INFO FROM FORMER AND LATER CHART DOCUMENTARY AND HORROR
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MOVIES
ARE
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LESS INCLINATION AMONG BOTH THE CONTINENTS
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15% AND 10% IN ASIA, 20%
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EUROPE


OVERALL
. OTHER GENRES OF
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ARE SAME IN BOTH THE CHARTS
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BY WHICH WE CAN DEPICT THAT IN THESE TWO SECTIONS THEY PREFER
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WATCHING

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