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The bar chart provides data on the proportion of governments spending on road and transport in four countries in the years 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005

The bar chart provides data on the proportion of governments spending on road and transport in four countries in the years 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 BwVaa
It is clear that the percentage of paying out for road and transport of Italia and Portugal was the highest figure meanwhile that of UK and US was the least common popular. In addition, The proportion of Italia and the UK saw a considerable fluctuation. As far as the first columns, the proportion of Government spending on road and transport in Portugal ranked the first with 27% meanwhile that of Italia was lower than Portugal at 22, 5% in 1990. The quantity of government expending on streets and transport witnessed a moderate vacillation and the rate of Italia was the highest figure took up 28% in 2000. Moreover, the quantity of Portugal went down significantly from 27% to 20% in the following years. With regards to the remaining columns, the percentage of government paying on road and vehicle in US made up 12% while that of Uk was lower than US with 10% in 1990. Furthermore, there was a steady fluctuation of the date of UK besides the rate of the UK was the least figure with 7%. And the proportion of USA experienced considerable upward trend from 12% in 1990 to 15% in 2005.
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clear
that the percentage of paying out for road and transport of
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Italia
and Portugal was the highest figure meanwhile that of UK and US was the least common popular.
In addition
, The proportion of
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Italia
and the UK
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saw
a considerable fluctuation.

As far as the
first
columns, the proportion of
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Government
spending on road and transport in Portugal ranked the
first
with 27% meanwhile that of
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Italia
was lower than Portugal at 22, 5% in 1990. The quantity of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
expending on streets and transport witnessed a moderate vacillation and the rate of
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Italia
was the highest figure took up 28% in 2000.
Moreover
, the quantity of Portugal went down
significantly
from 27% to 20% in the following years.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
With regards to
the remaining columns, the percentage of
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government
paying on road and vehicle in US made up 12% while that of
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Uk
was lower than US with 10% in 1990.
Furthermore
, there was a steady fluctuation of the date of UK
besides
the rate of the UK was the least figure with 7%. And the proportion
A determiner is probably missing here: "of the USA".
of USA
experienced considerable upward trend from 12% in 1990 to 15% in 2005.
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