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The diagrams show the collected and converted water for drinking in Australia region

The diagrams show the collected and converted water for drinking in Australia region BYO66
The assigned picture chart illustrate the process of how rainwater is harvested to use as drinking water in an Australian town in an which several steps are included. In order to, use rainwater for drinking every house collects water on their roof and then send it through drains to a water filter where water is first filtered to remove the impurities. subsequently, water send to a storage tank. From this point onwards, the water is sent to a treatment plant in which they added chemical to treat water. For the after the chemical treatment water become a geometry and then this water sand to the housefull consumption of by people. Overall, process intiates from collects water on roots by people and end with the clean water is used for drinking in which all steps play paramount role.
The assigned picture chart illustrate the process of how rainwater
is harvested
to
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use
as drinking
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water
in an Australian town in
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an
which several steps
are included
. In order to,
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use
rainwater for drinking every
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house
collects
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water
on their roof and then
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send
it through drains to a
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water
filter where
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water
is
first
filtered to remove the impurities.
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subsequently
,
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water
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send
to a storage tank. From this point onwards, the
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water
is
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sent
to a treatment plant in which they
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added
chemical to treat
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water
. For
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the after the
chemical treatment
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water
become a geometry and then this
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water
sand to the
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housefull
consumption of by
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people
.
Overall
, process
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intiates
from collects
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water
on roots by
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people
and
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end
with the clean
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water
is
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used
for drinking in which all steps play paramount role.
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IELTS academic The diagrams show the collected and converted water for drinking in Australia region

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  American English
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137 words
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