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The 2 maps show the road access to a city hospital. Summarise.

The 2 maps show the road access to a city hospital. Summarise. KnxA9
The maps illustrate the road transportation route to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. At a first glance, it can be observed that a substantial amount of change has taken place in the transportation structure. The integrated parking system is divided into 2 lots: one for the public and one for the staff. The public car park is built to the east of the ring road which surrounds the hospital in all directions. On the other hand, the staff car park is constructed to the east of the hospital road, located in front of the hospital. It is also connected to the ring road. Previously, the hospital had 6 bus stands which have been replaced by a common bus station which is located to the West of the hospital road. The station is connected to both the roundabouts, which are located in either direction of the hospital road.
The maps illustrate the
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road
transportation route to a city
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hospital
in 2007 and in 2010. At a
first
glance, it can
be observed
that a substantial amount of
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change
has taken place in the transportation structure. The integrated parking system
is divided
into 2 lots: one for the public and one for the staff.

The public car park
is built
to the east of the ring
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road
which surrounds the
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hospital
in all directions.
On the other hand
, the staff car park
is constructed
to the east of the
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hospital
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road
, located in front of the
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hospital
. It is
also
connected to the ring road.

Previously, the
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hospital
had 6 bus stands which have
been replaced
by a common bus station which
is located
to the West of the
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hospital
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road
. The station
is connected
to both the roundabouts, which
are located
in either direction of the
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hospital
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road
.

IELTS academic The 2 maps show the road access to a city hospital. Summarise.

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