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The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram shows two primary processes on how an electricity generator functions from the sea wave power. As we can see from the given pictorials, both high and low tidal waves are used to push air into and suck air out of the generator to produce the electricity. According to the given diagrams, the structure of the generator is placed near a cliff or sea wall. This structure consists of a large chamber where a turbine is placed inside the two columns. One part of the column is attached to the cliff or sea wall, while the other one is extended into the sea. The turbine inside the chamber is used to generate the electricity in two phases. In the first scheme, it indicated when the high tides approach the structure, water is pushed into the chamber and creates air pressure within the column. Then, the air reaches the atmosphere, hence resulting in electricity. The second scheme illustrates the process when the low tides retreat. In this occasion, the air is sucked back in through the turbine, where electricity continues to be generated. To sum up, the turbine rotates in the same direction, regardless of the direction of airflow. Overall, we can conclude that the structure of the generator can produce electricity for both phases, which is entering and retreating of tidal waves.
The diagram
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shows
two primary processes on how an
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electricity
generator functions from the
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sea
wave power. As we can
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see
from the
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given
pictorials, both high and low tidal waves are
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used
to push
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air
into and suck
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air
out of the generator to produce the electricity.

According to the
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given
diagrams, the
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structure
of the generator
is placed
near a cliff or
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sea
wall. This
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structure
consists of a large chamber where a
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turbine
is placed
inside the two columns. One part of the column
is attached
to the cliff or
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sea
wall, while the other one
is extended
into the
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sea
. The
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turbine
inside the chamber is
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used
to generate the
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electricity
in two phases.

In the
first
scheme, it indicated when the high tides approach the
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structure
, water
is pushed
into the chamber and creates
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air
pressure within the column. Then, the
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air
reaches the atmosphere,
hence
resulting in electricity.

The second scheme illustrates the process when the low tides retreat. In this occasion, the
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air
is sucked
back in through the
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turbine
, where
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electricity
continues to
be generated
. To sum up, the
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turbine
rotates in the same direction, regardless of the direction of airflow.

Overall
, we can conclude that the
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structure
of the generator can produce
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electricity
for both phases, which is entering and retreating of tidal waves.
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IELTS academic The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

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