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The bar chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart illustrates the four major stress reasons for Canadian between 25 and 75 and over, which are health issues, inadequate money, overwork, and no particular reason. Units are measured in the percentage of the related categories. The youngest age group (25-54) mostly get stressed as a cause of overwork (25%), followed by lack of funds comes for the second (15%). No particular reason for stressing and worried about their health respectively account for 7% and 4%. In contrast, the greatest cause of stress in age 55-64 is for no particular reason (17%), while 15% still get stressed because of work. Money and health problems finally score for 10% of stress experienced in this group. The same results occur in the age group 65-74, where 30% get stressed as a cause for no particular reason. 15% worried about their health problems, whereas only few people get stressed from working too much (3%). At last, the oldest age group mostly also stresses for no particular reason (32%) and their own health (23%). Not having enough money and overwork are not important stress factors anymore for them (both score less than 5%). To sum up, most elderly Canadians get stressed without a particular reason and health issues. Whereas, the young Canadians get stressed dominantly for overwork. The least cause of stress is overwork for the elderly group, while health is not the main issue for the youngest age group.
The bar chart illustrates the four major
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for Canadian between 25 and 75 and over, which are
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health
issues, inadequate money, overwork, and no
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particular
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reason
. Units
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in the percentage of the related categories.

The youngest
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age
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group
(25-54)
mostly
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get
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as a
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cause
of overwork (25%), followed by lack of funds
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comes
for the second (15%). No
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particular
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reason
for stressing and worried about their
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health
respectively
account for 7% and 4%.
In contrast
, the greatest
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cause
of
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stress
in
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age
55-64 is for no
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particular
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reason
(17%), while 15%
still
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because
of work. Money and
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health
problems
finally
score for 10% of
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experienced in this group.

The same results occur in the
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age
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group
65-74, where 30%
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as a
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for no
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particular
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reason
. 15% worried about their
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health
problems, whereas
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only
few
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people
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from working too much (3%). At last, the oldest
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age
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group
mostly
also
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stresses
for no
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particular
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reason
(32%) and their
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own
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health
(23%). Not having
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enough
money and overwork are not
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important
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stress
factors anymore for them (both score less than 5%).

To sum up, most elderly Canadians
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without a
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particular
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reason
and
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health
issues. Whereas, the young Canadians
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dominantly
for overwork. The least
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cause
of
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stress
is overwork for the elderly
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group
, while
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health
is not the main issue for the youngest
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age
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group
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada.

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