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the diagrams illustrate how the small town of Islip changed after some developments.

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the diagrams illustrate how the small town of Islip changed after some developments. Overall, the town will be totally transformed in a number of different ways. On the north of the map, we can see the main road running through its center is expected to be used for pedestrians only. Moreover, a row of shops on the north side of the main road and the countryside will be demolished to make way for new construction including Bus station, Shopping center, Car park and New housing from west to east, respectively. By contrast, shops located on the other side of the main road are forecast to remain unchanged. On the south of the map, there will appear new housing which will be situated on the left-hand of the park. Besides, a dual carriageway will be constructed as a ring around the town centre. In addition, School will be expanded after the development, the opposite will true for the park.
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the
diagrams illustrate how the
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small
town of
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Islip
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changed
after
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some
developments.
Overall
, the town will be
totally
transformed in a number of
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different
ways. On the north of the map, we can
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see
the main road running through its center is
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expected
to be
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used
for pedestrians
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only
.
Moreover
, a row of shops on the north side of the main road and the countryside will
be demolished
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
way for new construction including Bus station, Shopping center, Car park and New housing from west to east,
respectively
. By contrast, shops located on the other side of the main road are forecast to remain unchanged. On the south of the map, there will appear new housing which will
be situated
on the
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left
-hand of the park.
Besides
, a dual carriageway will
be constructed
as a ring around the town
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centre
.
In addition
, School will
be expanded
after the development, the opposite will true for the park.
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IELTS academic the diagrams illustrate how the small town of Islip changed after some developments.

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