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The map describes the change of a park from 1980 to now.

The map describes the change of a park from 1980 to now. dqGbd
The given diagram depicts a park from year 1980 and preasently. The figure campare the difference from past to now. Moving to the picture, in year 1980 there were trees which situated at north of the map and there were flowers on the one corner of map. It was clearly seen from map that there was a pond and bench constructed in east of the map. Moving to the rest of details, now there are a lot of new things constructed. At the north side there are picnic chairs, desks, barbecue are newly introduced while trees was old. In the east of map there are pond and bench which was same as 1980. At the south west corner a play ground is constructed which replace the flowers. Overall, the map shown the difference between past and present, in which many new things introduced.
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diagram depicts a park from year 1980 and
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. The figure
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campare
the difference from past to
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now
.

Moving to the picture, in year 1980 there were trees which situated at north of the
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map
and there were flowers on the one corner of
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map
. It was
clearly
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seen
from
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map
that there was a pond and bench constructed in east of the map.

Moving to the rest of
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details
,
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now
there are
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a lot of
new things constructed. At the north side there are picnic chairs, desks, barbecue are
newly
introduced while trees was
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old
. In the east of
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map
there are pond and
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bench
which was same as 1980. At the
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south west
corner a play ground
is constructed
which replace the flowers.

Overall
, the
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map
shown the difference between past and present, in which
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many
new things introduced.
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IELTS academic The map describes the change of a park from 1980 to now.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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