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The following graph shows the trend of populations of Ireland and Europe from 1740 to 1980 and beyond. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following graph shows the trend of populations of Ireland and Europe from 1740 to 1980 and beyond. GwOjg
The polyline graph illustrates the population of Ireland and Europe from 1740 to 1980 and also further on proportion of people. Overall, it is clear that Ireland proportion is increase and decrease in many years but, in end it is increased also Europe is higher than IrelandTo begin with, in 1740 only between 2 to 3 million population were seem in Ireland. But, in year of 1820 to 1860 the population of Ireland was increased by 8-9 million. however, after 1860 Ireland citizens gone down and in 1980 it were lie on 5 to 6 million population also far on 1980 it will predict that as increasing population in Ireland in upcoming years. Furthermore, the number of population in Europe was slightly down to Ireland in 1740. But, in the year of 1900 it goes upward by 400 million population and that was the year for Europe to ross upward in population and the year of 1980 it were lie on 700 to 800 million population and it will prectable that it will content or decrease in upcoming years according to population.
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of Ireland and Europe from 1740 to 1980 and
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, it is
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population
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were
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in Ireland.
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, in
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year
of 1820 to 1860 the
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population
of Ireland
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million
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, after 1860 Ireland citizens gone down and in 1980 it
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lie on 5 to 6
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million
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population
also
far on 1980 it will predict that as increasing
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population
in Ireland in upcoming years.
Furthermore
, the number of
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population
in Europe was
slightly
down to Ireland in 1740.
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, in the
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year
of 1900 it goes upward by 400
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million
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population
and that was the
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year
for Europe to
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ross
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and the
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of 1980 it
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lie on 700 to 800
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and it will
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IELTS academic The following graph shows the trend of populations of Ireland and Europe from 1740 to 1980 and beyond.

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