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The diagrams illustrate 3 different types of bridge

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The diagrams illustrate 3 different types of bridge Overall, the design of 3 bridges differs in terms of height and the way we use it. Each type is suitable for a specific location, such as a lake, a river, and a sea. The Arch bridge is constructed to cross small areas of water such as lakes, and it has a maximum length of about 200 meters. Its no more than 100 meters in height only permits small ships to go across. In contrast, a concrete girder bridge is constructed by pliers which distance is no more than 200 meters. However, it has a limitless amount of pliers used in other to across a bigger water area such as a river. Medium-sized ships can go through this type of bridge, which can be more than 300 meters in height. Finally, on the sea, a suspension bridge enables large-sized ships to go across it, because of the depth it goes through. Pliers can be spaced between 400 to 2000 meters-depending on terrain-about 10 times more than the distance between pliers of a concrete girder bridge.
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, the design of 3
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differs in terms of height and the way we
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it. Each type is suitable for a specific location, such as a lake, a river, and a sea.

The Arch
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is constructed
to cross
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areas of water such as lakes, and it has a maximum length of about 200
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no more than 100
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in height
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permits
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small
ships to go across.
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, a concrete girder
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is constructed
by pliers which distance is no more than 200
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meters
.
However
, it has a limitless amount of pliers
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used
in other to across a bigger water area such as a river. Medium-sized ships can go through this type of
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bridge
, which can be more than 300
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meters
in height.

Finally
, on the sea, a suspension
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bridge
enables large-sized ships to go across it,
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of the depth it goes through. Pliers can
be spaced
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