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The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.

The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee. mMAq

Originally a street between Foster Road 85 and 85 Avenue, there was nothing there, just a solid road with no sidewalk or anything. Between these streets, mostly only cars passed, and the life of pedestrians was complicated, due to the lack of sidewalks, as well as bicycle paths. After some time, our state decided to fix this problem and began work between 83 and 85 Avenues. After the renovation, this street was hard to recognize. Since there were sidewalks and people finally without fear that they will be knocked down walk on the sidewalk with their family. In addition to the sidewalk, a bicycle path has been added here, thanks to it, many fans of active sports and cycling can easily ride along this street. Trees were also planted. And this street was greatly transformed, received a variety of colors and it became very pleasant to walk along this street, between the trees planted in the middle of the road. I believe that the changes before and after are enormous. And this street has been transformed for the better.

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street
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just
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sidewalk
 or anything. Between these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardcourtthoroughfaretrack
streets
, mostly
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only
 cars passed, and the life of pedestrians was complicated
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sidewalks
, as well
 as bicycle paths. After This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time, our state decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 this problem and began work between 83 and 85 Avenues. After the renovation, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardcourtthoroughfaretrack
street
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to recognize. Since there were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackpath
sidewalks
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
finally
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 down walk on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackpath
sidewalk
 with their family. In addition
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sidewalk
, a bicycle path has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
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many
 fans of active sports and cycling can easily
 ride along this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardcourtthoroughfaretrack
street
. Trees were also
 planted. And this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardcourtthoroughfaretrack
street
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 transformed, received a variety of colors and it became This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 pleasant to walk along this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardcourtthoroughfaretrack
street
, between the trees planted in the middle of the road. I believe that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
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before
 and after are enormous. And this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardcourtthoroughfaretrack
street
 has been transformed
 for the better. 