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The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.

The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee. wLAr
The map reveals desired change to Foster Road. First of all, all of the buildings and road signs aside the road will remain unchanged. Electric poles also will stay on their current places But there is going to be large reconstruction for the car and pedestrian road. The changes will be directed to improvement of conditions for local residents and people who have not personal transport. In addition, amount of car and noises will decrease, because there will be wider sidewalks, and bicycle roads is going to be invented. It will give people more options to travel. Ther also will be a tramway, so with all of the changes above, the car road will become twice smaller. Pedestrians will get some opportunities, besides wider sidewalks. Pedestrian roads is going to be decorated with trees, that will allow to reduce some amount of harmful gases produced by transport. There also will be a new crosswalk, that will give people an ability to cross from one side of the road, to another one
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change
to Foster Road.

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,
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all of the
buildings and
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road
signs aside the
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road
will remain unchanged. Electric poles
also
will stay on their
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current
places
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But
there is going to be large reconstruction for the car and pedestrian
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road
. The
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changes
will
be directed
to improvement of conditions for local residents and
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people
who have not personal transport.

In addition
, amount of car and noises will decrease,
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because
there will be wider sidewalks, and bicycle
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roads
is going to
be invented
. It will give
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people
more options to travel.
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also
will be a tramway,
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so
with
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all of the
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changes
above, the car
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road
will become twice smaller. Pedestrians will
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get
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some
opportunities,
besides
wider sidewalks.

Pedestrian
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roads
is going to
be decorated
with trees, that will
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allow
to
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reduce
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some
amount of harmful gases produced by transport. There
also
will be a new crosswalk, that will give
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people
an ability to cross from one side of the
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road
, to another
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IELTS academic The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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