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The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.

The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee. LAVR
The presented illustration of two maps demonstrates the Foster road's renovation of the extensive sidewalks, advanced crossing, bicycle pathway and avenue trees and compare key highlights in changes of construction. Overall, it is obvious, despite the fact that most part of the Foster road has been expanded with some changes at the edge of the road and in the road itself, whereas the household of this avenue has remained untouched. It is conspicuous that the highway has been constructed from a four-lane road into a three-lane road. Moreover, fourteen trees have been planted on both sides of the road. Furthermore, sidewalks have been expanded and their facilities are connected with bicycle lanes. Finally, added a pedestrian crossing on the southern part of the road.
The presented illustration of two maps demonstrates the Foster road's renovation of the extensive sidewalks, advanced crossing, bicycle pathway and avenue trees and compare key highlights in
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itself, whereas the household of this avenue has remained untouched.

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from a four-lane
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into a three-lane
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.
Moreover
, fourteen trees have
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on both sides of the
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Furthermore
, sidewalks have
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and their facilities
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with bicycle lanes.
Finally
,
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a pedestrian crossing on the southern part of the
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IELTS academic The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.

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3 paragraphs
124 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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