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The diagrams below shows the process of getting a driving license.

The diagrams below shows the process of getting a driving license. 7Jlqk
The provided procedure elucidates the collecting a driving license. It is appearance to be liner as well as time- consuming process. Overall, a quick glance at the graph reveals that, first must be visited license center and passing threw number steps of getting licence. First and foremost, should be visit licence office then fill up application from with fundamental details. Last but not the least, after complete from, booked eye test which is devided into two parts former people might be fail therefore further process os stop here due to not appliable for driving and latter it is pass they pay fees. Furthermore, once payment is completed, done is writing test. Then, it is also divided in two different path. First individual passed out written test then attended driving test, compelete it and get licence however a number of people fail in driving test then they must be pay fees again and complete process as above mentioned. Moreover, whereas, people might be fail in writing test thus, they gave chance to pass it two times when it passed they provided driving test otherwise process will be gone back on pay fees and doing process step by step.
The provided procedure elucidates the collecting a
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driving
license. It is appearance to be liner
as well
as time- consuming process.

Overall
, a quick glance at the graph reveals that,
first
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must
be visited
license center and passing threw number steps of getting
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licence
.

First
and foremost, should be visit
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licence
office then fill up application from with fundamental
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details
. Last
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but
not the least, after complete from, booked eye
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test
which is
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devided
into two parts former
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people
might be fail
therefore
further
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process
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os
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stop
here due to not
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appliable
for
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driving
and latter it is pass they pay fees.

Furthermore
, once payment
is completed
, done is writing
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test
. Then, it is
also
divided in two
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different
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path
.
First
individual passed out written
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test
then attended
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driving
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test
,
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compelete
it and
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get
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licence
however
a number of
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people
fail in
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driving
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test
then they
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must
be pay fees again and complete
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process
as above mentioned.
Moreover
, whereas,
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people
might be fail in writing
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test
thus
, they gave chance to pass it two times when it passed they provided
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driving
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test
otherwise
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process
will
be gone
back on pay fees and doing
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process
step by step.

IELTS academic The diagrams below shows the process of getting a driving license.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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