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The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia in the present and in the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting relevant features

The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia in the present and in the future. AMnX
The diagram illustrates the process by which the water supply system works in Australia and the proposed changes to the system in the future for ensuring a continued clean water supply to the town. Overall, the proposed changes to the system are regarding the recycling water for the city. In the future, both stormwater and wastewater are proposed to be treated and released into the river, ensuring recycled water being available for the town. In the current water supply system, water is stored in a dam and released into the city ensuring a supply of pure water to the city. The stormwater is released directly into the river while wastewater is treated and then released into the river. The proposed changes to the system involve the treatment of stormwater also before releasing it into the river. Both wastewater and stormwater are proposed to be treated by the water treatment plant, recycling wastewater before being discharged into the river.
The diagram illustrates the process by which the
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works in Australia and the
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in the future for ensuring a continued clean
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to the town.

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are regarding the recycling
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water
for the city. In the future, both stormwater and wastewater are
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proposed
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and
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released
into the
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, ensuring recycled
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being available for the town.

In the
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current
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,
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is stored
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released
into the city ensuring a
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supply
of pure
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water
to the city. The stormwater is
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released
directly
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river
while wastewater
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released
into the river.

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involve the treatment of stormwater
also
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river
. Both wastewater and stormwater are
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be treated
by the
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treatment plant, recycling wastewater
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia in the present and in the future.

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158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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