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The bar graphs represent the number of marriage and divorce in the USA from 1972 to 2000, which is in millions. also, explain the marital status of adults in 1970 and 2000, this data is in percentage. Overall, it is seen clearly from both chats, The number of marriages reduced over the period, while the married status of adults is the highest in both years. Looking at the first graph in more detail, it is evident that the number of marriages, which conducted in the USA slowly declined from 2.5 million in 1970 to 2 million in 2000. The divorce rate fluctuated which started from 1 million in 1970 and ended at the same number in 2000. Turning to the remaining data, The percentage of adults who was unmarried rose from 8% in 1970 to 20% in 2000. 70% of American adult was married in 1970, but that number decreased at 60% in 2000. The Widower and divorced adult in America was under 10% in both years.

The bar graphs represent the number of marriage and divorce in the USA from 1972 to 2000, which is in millions. also, explain the marital status of adults in 1970 and 2000, this data is in percentage. Overall, it is seen clearly from both chats, The number of marriages reduced over the period, while the married status of adults is the highest in both years. Looking at the first graph in more detail, it is evident that the number of marriages, which conducted in the USA slowly declined from 2. 5 million in 1970 to 2 million in 2000. The divorce rate fluctuated which started from 1 million in 1970 and ended at the same number in 2000. Turning to the remaining data, The percentage of adults who was unmarried rose from 8% in 1970 to 20% in 2000. 70% of American adult was married in 1970, but that number decreased at 60% in 2000. The Widower and divorced adult in America was under 10% in both years. YpXd
The bar graphs represent the number of marriage and divorce in the USA from 1972 to 2000, which is in millions. also, explain the marital status of adults in 1970 and 2000, this data is in percentage. Overall, it is seen clearly from both chats, The number of marriages reduced over the period, while the married status of adults is the highest in both years. Looking at the first graph in more detail, it is evident that the number of marriages, which conducted in the USA slowly declined from 2. 5 million in 1970 to 2 million in 2000. The divorce rate fluctuated which started from 1 million in 1970 and ended at the same number in 2000. Turning to the remaining data, The percentage of adults who was unmarried rose from 8% in 1970 to 20% in 2000. 70% of American adult was married in 1970, but that number decreased at 60% in 2000. The Widower and divorced adult in America was under 10% in both years.
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in 1970 and 2000, this data is in percentage.

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is the highest in both years.

Looking at the
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of marriages, which conducted in the USA
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in 2000.

Turning to the remaining data, The percentage of
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IELTS academic The bar graphs represent the number of marriage and divorce in the USA from 1972 to 2000, which is in millions. also, explain the marital status of adults in 1970 and 2000, this data is in percentage. Overall, it is seen clearly from both chats, The number of marriages reduced over the period, while the married status of adults is the highest in both years. Looking at the first graph in more detail, it is evident that the number of marriages, which conducted in the USA slowly declined from 2. 5 million in 1970 to 2 million in 2000. The divorce rate fluctuated which started from 1 million in 1970 and ended at the same number in 2000. Turning to the remaining data, The percentage of adults who was unmarried rose from 8% in 1970 to 20% in 2000. 70% of American adult was married in 1970, but that number decreased at 60% in 2000. The Widower and divorced adult in America was under 10% in both years.

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