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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. DRDW

Task 1 The supplied pie charts compare the annual spending made by a school in the Uk for three respective decades which are 1981, 1991and 2001. Overall, the salaries for teachers remained the highest portion in spending while insurance was the least expenses over the 20year time framOn the one hand, in 1981 teachers' salaries accounted nearly a half 40% of total school costs and in escalated singificantly in 1991 which accounted exactly a half 50% and remained the highest spending in 2001as well 45%. Meanwhile, other workers' salaries references, and furniture and tool fluctuated and amassed big percentage of school disbursement all together, it was about 40%in average. On the other hand, insurance was at the lowest percentages of total school spending in overall observed years. It was only 2% of total spending in 1981 and remained the tiniest fraction subsequently in 1991 and 2001, 3% and 8% respectively

Task 1

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