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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. DRDW
Task 1 The supplied pie charts compare the annual spending made by a school in the Uk for three respective decades which are 1981, 1991and 2001. Overall, the salaries for teachers remained the highest portion in spending while insurance was the least expenses over the 20year time framOn the one hand, in 1981 teachers' salaries accounted nearly a half 40% of total school costs and in escalated singificantly in 1991 which accounted exactly a half 50% and remained the highest spending in 2001as well 45%. Meanwhile, other workers' salaries references, and furniture and tool fluctuated and amassed big percentage of school disbursement all together, it was about 40%in average. On the other hand, insurance was at the lowest percentages of total school spending in overall observed years. It was only 2% of total spending in 1981 and remained the tiniest fraction subsequently in 1991 and 2001, 3% and 8% respectively
Task 1

The supplied pie charts compare the annual
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made by a
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in the
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Uk
for three respective decades which are 1981, 1991and 2001.

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, the salaries for teachers remained the highest portion in
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spending
while insurance was the least expenses over the 20year time
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framOn
the one hand, in 1981 teachers' salaries accounted
nearly
a half 40% of total
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school
costs and in escalated
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singificantly
in 1991 which accounted exactly a half 50% and remained the highest
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spending
in 2001as well 45%. Meanwhile, other workers' salaries references, and furniture and tool fluctuated and amassed
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big
percentage of
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school
disbursement all together, it was about 40%in average.

On the other hand
, insurance was at the lowest percentages of total
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school
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spending
in
overall
observed years. It was
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only
2% of total
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spending
in 1981 and remained the tiniest fraction
subsequently
in 1991 and 2001, 3% and 8%
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respectively
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IELTS academic The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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