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The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. kJW8
The bar chart illustrates the reasons men and women chose to work from home in 2019. Overall, saving money was the main reason for both males and females (45% and 42% respectively). In contrast, approximately a quarter of males put productivity as a reason, which was twice as high as the female response (24% and 11% respectively). For childcare, the pattern was different again with almost a quarter of females giving this reason compared to very few males (4%). The table shows the hours men and women worked from home in 2019. The vast majority of males worked over 30 hours per week (81%) contrasting with a minority of females (6%) doing similar hours. This pattern is reversed when examining the under ten hours category with almost three quarters of females working this amount compared to only 3% of males. The 10 to 30 hours per week category shows fewer marked differences. To sum up, it can be seen that men and women do not always give the same reasons for home working and, in general, men work longer hours from home.
The bar chart illustrates the
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reasons
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men
and women chose to work from home in 2019.
Overall
, saving money was the main
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reason
for both
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males
and
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females
(45% and 42%
respectively
).
In contrast
, approximately a quarter of
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males
put productivity as a
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reason
, which was twice as high as the
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female
response (24% and 11%
respectively
). For childcare, the pattern was
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different
again with almost a quarter of
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females
giving this
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reason
compared to
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very
few
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males
(4%).

The table
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shows
the
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hours
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men
and women worked from home in 2019. The vast majority of
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males
worked over 30
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hours
per week (81%) contrasting with a minority of
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females
(6%) doing similar
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hours
. This pattern
is reversed
when examining the under ten
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hours
category with almost three quarters of
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females
working this amount compared to
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only
3% of
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males
. The 10 to 30
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hours
per week category
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shows
fewer marked differences.

To sum up, it can be
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seen
that
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men
and women do not always give the same
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reasons
for home working and,
in general
,
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men
work longer
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hours
from home.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
182 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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