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The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm. bDA1W

The provided process diagram outlines the life cycle of the silkworm. Overall, the cyclical diagram illustrates how silkworm is born and grown up in 4 stages, beginning with silkworm’s eggs and ending with a moth. First of all, many small eggs are laid on a leaf. After 10 days, the silkworm larva hatches and started to eat their food, usually known as mulberry leaf. Whenever the silkworm larva ate enough leaf, it will start to cover itself with silk thread for about 4-6 weeks. From this moment, the silkworm larva won’t eat anything more because the amount of mulberry leaf it has eaten provide enough energy and keep them from getting hungry while doing the cocoon. But it takes 3-8 days for the larva to cover the whole body with its silk thread and become a cocoon. Finally, the cocoon will break and a mature moth will come out. This process often takes about 16 days. After this last stages, the moth will continue to lay its eggs and repeat the same process.

The provided process diagram outlines the life cycle of the silkworm.

Overall
, the cyclical diagram illustrates how silkworm is born
 and grown up in 4 stages, beginning with silkworm’s eggs and ending with a moth.

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