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The diagrams below show the development of a small coastal village and its surrounding area into a tourist destination.

The diagrams below show the development of a small coastal village and its surrounding area into a tourist destination. Ve3w
The diagrams illustrate the improvement of a small outskirt village and conversion of its surrounding area into a tourist destination in the period of 15 years. Overall, the most striking feature of the diagrams, populations have increased in 2015 and conversion of Farmland and Forest park into sport centre with raise in the tourists number. A glance at the diagram, a small village has been developed to a Resort in 2015 with 70. 000 population as well as 10, 000 Tourists. A major change can be observed in conversion of Farmland and Forest park into the court of Golf, swimming pool and Tennis. Moreover, with housing facility, a school has been built near it in 15 years. A hotel has been modernised with car park area. Considering the other factors, in 2000, there was a Fish market which has been converted into Holiday Apartments. Additionally, Cafe & Restaurant and Private beach have been replaced on the place of Fishing Haubour. The number of Boats have been eliminated in 2015.
The diagrams illustrate the improvement of a
small
outskirt village and conversion of its surrounding area into a tourist destination in the period of 15 years.

Overall
, the most striking feature of the diagrams, populations have increased in 2015 and conversion of Farmland and Forest park into sport
centre
with raise in the tourists number.

A glance at the diagram, a
small
village has
been developed
to a Resort in 2015 with 70. 000 population
as well
as 10, 000 Tourists. A major
change
can
be observed
in conversion of Farmland and Forest park into the court of Golf, swimming pool and Tennis.
Moreover
, with housing facility, a school has
been built
near it in 15 years. A hotel has been
modernised
with car park area.

Considering the other factors, in 2000, there was a Fish market which has
been converted
into Holiday Apartments.
Additionally
,
Cafe
& Restaurant and Private beach have
been replaced
on the place of Fishing
Haubour
. The number of Boats
have
been eliminated
in 2015.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the development of a small coastal village and its surrounding area into a tourist destination.

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