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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. AWxn

The figure illustrates the process of instant noodles making in 8 steps. At the first stage, floor is carried in a vehicle from storage silos to factory for further processing. There, in second stage, it is mixed with water and oil in a machine to make dough which is then in step 3, spread as a sheet with the help of big automatic rollers. Afterwards, in step four this dough sheet is cut into strips of equal dimensions and then in fifth step these strips which form noodles are pour into noodles discs. Where, these noodles are fried and dried into a form useable for eating. Before, going to final packed form, these noodles are mixed with vegetables and spices in disposable cups. At last, after completion of sealing, labels are stick to these containers. So, instant spicy and mouthwatering noodles are ready for quick use.

The figure illustrates the process of instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 making in 8 steps.

At the first
 stage, floor is carried
 in a vehicle from storage silos to factory for further
 processing. There, in second stage, it is mixed
 with water and oil in a machine to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 dough which is then in step 3, spread as a sheet with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 automatic rollers. Afterwards, in step four this dough sheet is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into strips of equal dimensions and then in fifth step these strips which form You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 are Consider using a past participle here: "poured".poured
pour
 into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 discs. Where, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are fried
 and dried into a form useable for eating.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
, going to final packed form, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are mixed
 with vegetables and spices in disposable cups. At last, after completion of sealing, labels are stick to these containers.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, instant spicy and mouthwatering You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 are ready for quick This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. 