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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustration presents the process of the wave-energy machine and its placement. Overall, the electricity generator process begins from the site of installation of the machine up to the the wave direction until airflow. First of all, wave energy machines location should be installed in a high and low costs area, in which the small waves (low output) and large waves( high output) will flow into the machine. There are two chambers in the electricity generator. The airfilled and the water filled chamber. The wave direction fills in the chamber water levels through the waves direction. Pressure produces airflow going up to the turbine and releases out of the generator. In total, the wave-energy machine demonstrates that all the components plays a significant part; as to the simpliest way one will not work. This will also be helpful process to know and learn more ways people can get energy from in a natural way withouth harming the environment.
The illustration presents the process of the wave-energy
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machine
and its placement.

Overall
, the electricity generator process
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begins
from the site of installation of the
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machine
up to
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the the
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wave
direction until airflow.

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First of all
,
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wave
energy
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machines
location should
be installed
in a high and low costs area, in which the
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small
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waves
(low output) and large waves
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(
high output) will flow into the machine.

There are two chambers in the electricity generator. The
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airfilled
and the water filled chamber. The
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wave
direction fills in the chamber water levels through the
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waves
direction. Pressure produces airflow going up to the turbine and releases out of the generator.

In total, the wave-energy
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machine
demonstrates that all the components plays a significant part; as to the
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simpliest
way one will not work. This will
also
be helpful process to know and learn more ways
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people
can
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get
energy from
Consider replacing "in a natural way" with the adverb for "natural"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a natural way
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withouth
harming the environment.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
158 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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